WELCOME BACK!!!!!
Monday, August 31st:
  • Introductions and Seating
  • Fire Drill Procedure
  • Syllabus/Course Review/Expectations

Homework:Binders Due on Wednesday
BYOT tomorrow
Read and have parent signature sheet for Wednesday.


Tuesday, September 1st:
  • 1. Sign up for Edmodo course using this log-in screen: https://hershey.edmodo.com/

    • Use the following class code:qiq4s9
    • If you have any problem, email Mr. Wales at rwales@hershey.k12.pa.us, and I'll help you out.
  • 2. Read BYOT citizenship rules.

  • 3. Common Spelling words received / activity
    *Challenge on Thursday.
  • 4. Begin reading about Annotations: Models for Writers, pages 47-51


Wednesday, September 2nd:
  • 1. Collect Parent Signature Sheet
  • 2. Attempt to access Edmodo quiz on own device or iPad to take practice quiz.
  • 3. Receive Handout about annotations (Why I Annotate/Study Strategies--Annotations)
  • 4. Receive Bryson handout--excerpts from Walk in the Woods," to annotate and use to prep for the longer essay response on Tuesday's diagnostic formative.


Thursday, September 3rd:
1. Play an elimination spelling word game (small groups), using the Collins Writing spelling word sheet.
2. Students use technology
3. Finish reading and annotating Bryson handout


Tuesday, September 8th
  • Diagnostic Exam: Complete Multiple Choice and at least 1st essay response.


Wednesday, September 9th:


Thursday, September 10th:


Friday, September 11th:


Monday, September 14th:
  • 1. DLP 4
    • Review DLP 3
  • 2. Demo of Optional Vocabulary Online
  • 3. Review 3-column chart
    • Revise and hand in for formative grade
      • 1 pt. for annotation description
      • 1 pt. for example
      • 3 pts. for evaluation of explanation (10 pt. formative)
  • 4. Examine parts of "All Dried Up"


Tuesday, September 15th:
  • Read pages 219-220 together from Walk in the Woods (receive handout)
  • Vocabulary word work: affix: hypo root: therm
    • Students should copy the word work into notebooks
  • Reread 219-220 on own, making annotations
    • Annotate all paragraph main ideas as part of the 8 annotations (labeled on side of paragraph)
      • Main Ideas should state the content of the paragraph--the gist of the information given in a short phrase or sentence
    • In groups--5-- (broken up tasks/sections from Walk, per group), post the main idea to board or chart paper to review before leaving
      • What is the main idea of your group's paragraph?
      • Is there a topic sentence that alerts you to it?
      • How does the paragraph contribute to progression of the main idea of the essay/section purpose as a whole?
      • What is the function of the essay as a whole?

  • Homework: change each main idea into a "Purpose Statement"--meaning, write the function of the paragraph in reference to the whole excerpt.
    • "The purpose of the paragraph is to (illustrate, explore, explain, etc., etc.)


Wednesday, September 16th:
  • All: Formative Quiz Grade: Type 2
    • 2 minutes to answer
    • Describe at least 3 essential but different components of a main idea (give characteristics of a main idea, not what it isn't)
  • Review Type 2 as a whole class; students grade theirs using highlighters, and collect for a grade (formative-6 pts.)
  • Allow students time to share homework purpose statements with neighbor
  • Create Googledoc Summary
  • Begin looking for a site tool that will allow you to graphically organize information (app or otherwise) and post that to the assignment. (Due Wednesday--for all)


Thursday, September 17th:
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Friday, September 18th:
  • 1. Capitalization exercise on the internet: http://www.quia.com/quiz/113746.html?AP_rand=1536785613
  • http://esl.about.com/library/quiz/bl_capitalizequiz.htm
  • http://www.classzone.com/books/lnetwork_gr07/page_build.cfm?id=quiz&ch=10
    • about 10 minutes to practice
    • leave time for questions
  • 2. 3-Column Chart for those that are taking the summative.
  • 3. external image differentiate-your-law-firm-345x180.jpg
    Differentiated Exploration: Read and practice analyzing an article, audio, or short film.
    • Send me a picture of you somehow documenting your identification and/or analysis of purpose of the following:
      • The Title
      • The thesis of the argument
      • The major organizational pattern
      • The role of 2 influential sections/components of the piece
  • 4. For Homework, try to answer the following questions.
    • 1. What pattern of organization does Carson use for this essay?
    • 2. Why is the pattern of organization appropriate for this essay?
    • 3. What is the thesis/argument of her essay?
    • 4. Why is the title appropriate for the essay?
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Monday, September 21st:
  • 1. DLP 6
  • 2. Provide students with essay: "Praise the Humble Dung Beetle"
    • Annotate for tomorrow, so you can summarize in class
  • 3. Review 1st 2 sections of diagnostic


Tuesday, September 22nd:
1. Create formative summary: / 10 pts.
(Due by the end of class)
Criteria
  • 1st sentence establishes identification of piece and purpose
  • All major structural elements are represented (verbs used)
  • Illustrations are placed where necessary
3. Work on the following grammar links:
4. Redo Summative or Finish Extra Credit.(for Friday)
Wednesday, September 23rd:
No School
Thursday, September 24th:
1.DLP7:
2. Read pages 94 through 95 about paragraph "unity" in Models for Writers (for Thursday)
3. Model Creation of Ugly Duckling Sentence
  • Have topic
  • Have aspect to fulfill an organization method
  • Create main idea statement in the form of a topic
  • Create at least 3 more sentences that follow the topic sentence
  • Create at least 1 sentence that does not follow the topic sentence
Friday, September 25th
1. Use ugly duckling sentences for game
  • Fill out score card and set it up for 4 game "plays"
--Collect summatives and extra credit
2. Begin reading and annotating "Fahrenheit 59: What a Child's Fever..." (Formative quiz on Monday--vocab and main idea/detail)
Monday, September 28th
1. Edmodo Quiz
2. Work on the following exercise on technology--which reviews paragraph coherence.Unity Exercise
3. http://www.ted.com/playlists/142/the_forecast_calls_for
Tuesday, Sept. 29th:
FCA 1: Original claim that is in your own language (topic, opinion, precisely worded, debatable, original)
FCA 2: Find 2 pieces of evidence used from at least 1 source to support your claim; evidence has author's last name (and page number if necessary) in parentheses afterwards
FCA 3: Multi-paragraph organization that corresponds to class instruction (and format choice)
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Step 1: create claim
Step 2: find resources to support

Summative DLP Quiz 1 coming soon.
Wednesday, Sept. 30th:
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Homework: Find evidence from sources for homework

FROM HERE DOWN IS SIMPLY NOTES FROM PRIOR YEARS






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Friday, September 26th:

3. Introduce the new unit of readings by having students take a survey and find an article in Upfront magazine that correlates with what we were just reading about--or something from today's news.

Monday, September 29th:

1. DLP 9:

3. Review and complete the following activity:

Tuesday, September 30th

1. DLP 10:items in a series
2. Affix work--"pro" and "retro" flipcart


4. Formative Quiz via Edmodo: purpose of paragraphs

Take survey







from 23rd
  • 4. Access Edmodo to view class profile and answer some opinion poll questions in regards to race
    • True/False: racial issues are a big deal in Hershey
    • Racial issues are something that I feel I should be personally involved in
    • I think I have been involved or witnessed a negative experience in regards to race
    • Racial bigotry or hatred is something that I thing I'll have to deal with in my life
  • 5. We discussed the implications of student responses and students were introduced to the Socratic method of dialoguing. Also discussed the upcoming readings about race and justice in American culture and the need for sensitive discussion.
  • Video Link for resource: Socratic Dialogue



  • 2. Begin reading and making annotation for "The New face of America"
Homework for all: read and create at least 4 annotations per page, up to "One Drop Rule."



From the 25th
2. In groups of less than 5, students used highlighters to mark the functional portions of the 2 major portions (opening portions and 'Transcending Race') to find the function or purpose of individual or linked paragraph
  • Highlight where sections begin and end (within the larger sections)
  • Record function--purpose statement ("The purpose of this section is to_(include verb)_.")
  • Record content/main idea statement
3. Discuss findings as a class.

Homework: finish reading article, making annotations of the article.
Review the answers to the poll on Edmodo
Come tomorrow with comments relative to the discussions within the article and any additional thoughts



  • Set up classroom for a discussion/Socratic dialogue. (chips and tasks for feedback)
    • Have dialogue
  • Begin reading "The Freedom Riders" in small groups
  • Using the article, students were assigned one of the following sections.
    • Opening section
    • Ku Klux Clan
    • Kennedy's Response
    • Willing to Be Beaten and Jailed
  • For Friday, highlight within your assigned section (alternately highlighted and un-highlighted sections) that have clear sub-purposes within the overall purpose of the section
    • Define the overall purpose and main idea of your section

27th

  • 1. Review the sections assigned by:
    • Students use chart paper to map out their understanding of the purpose and sub-purposes within each section
    • Should be able to state each paragraphs main idea
  • 2. Begin watching a flim clip about segregation in the South and Freedom Riders
in the film or its connetion to the "Freedom Riders" article read using the Linoit posts below. Review before leaving.

Period 1 Responses and Questions

Period 2 Responses and Questions


Period 5 Responses and Questions

30th
1.
2. Continue to watch video concerning "The Freedom Riders":
    • http://video.pbs.org/video/1925571160/
    • Socrative or Linoit was used (in background) to post observations--at least one per student, while the video is playing:
      • How is this video applicable to contemporary American life?
        • How is this video and it's topic, relative to any issues within Hershey

9/22

3. Complete worksheet concerning unity from Walk in the Woods excerpt.
  • Review as a class to practice determining unity and coherence.
    • Unity: the "togetherness" of things; being controlled by an idea or generalization
    • Coherence: the proper ordering (with adhesion) of ideas or subparts
  • Review how putting the sentences in order is an operation of coherence. Picking out the ugly duckling is an operation of unity.


  • 1. Work on the following exercise on technology--which reviews paragraph coherence.

2. Group discussion about the environment: students take a survey to show opinions and then we discuss
https://docs.google.com/a/hershey.k12.pa.us/forms/d/1JbUZealUbRw0QJBM9XhQAT1bwa6KCU8EGr-AQ3C6AvU/viewform
3. Students continue to work on statement to make about the environment essay: